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Look beyond the horizon.
Out to sea.
Where free spirits roam
and my heart aches to be.

Nothing holds the waves back.
In fact all is embraced.
This storm of emotions is accepted
as natures coming course.

So as tears fall
and foam bursts.
Ships sink,
and hearts break.
The cycle moves on,
life breathes,
but someone has anchored me.
©2006-2009 ~luminousmoon
:iconluminousmoon:

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Our hearts could be like the ocean, except for one small detail. We have boundries and things to control us, the ocean is free.

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:iconluthienisilra:
Beautiful, Lumie-chan. Makes my heart sing and sorrow. Super-fave, definitly.
:icononewithdarkness:
brilliance a usual, i expect nothing less, say have you ever thought of doing a ballad, or a long xtory like poem, an example would be like the Oddysey, or the Iliad.
interesting form though dificult to master, though with your expertise you shan't have a worry

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put the government back in the people's hands! [link]
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
:iconluminousmoon:
no, actually it's never come to mind. :shrug: I'd have to think of an amazing story first to capture though.

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
:icononewithdarkness:
the one about teh man that must sacrifice children sounds appealing for such a genre

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put the government back in the people's hands! [link]
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Love is foolish when handled by fools, but caution blows it too the wind.
:icondeaf-ears:
Beautiful.... I love it. ^_^ It's sweet.
:iconluminousmoon:
:blush: thanks

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl
:iconluminousmoon:
:blush: thanks a bunchies

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We make for your sake such things as stand fast,
Through the ages these pages forever will last.
On blank paper the printer sets down what is heard,
Giving life to what's rife with the power of the word. -Michael Kongehl

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